Rewrite · Transform · Writing & Content

Rewrite a buried-lead paragraph into a BLUF opening

A bottom-line-up-front rewrite that places the buyer-identified main point as the first sentence, cuts the preamble, stays under a word budget, and lists which original background lines were dropped versus kept.

You receive: A JSON object: { bluf_sentence, supporting_background[], dropped_lines[], rewritten_paragraph, word_count }

Part of Pitch Investors

What's verified: STUD verifies the rewrite leads with the specified main point, is strictly shorter than the original and under the cap, keeps background within the limit, drops at least one line, and avoids known wind-up preambles. STUD does NOT judge whether the chosen main point is the RIGHT one, whether the dropped lines were truly expendable, or whether the rewrite reads well.

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Cost20 credits

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Deliverable interface

The exact vocabulary the automated check enforces: keys, tokens, entry points, and worked examples. Generated from the verification source.

{
 "buyerParamKeys": [
  "main_point",
  "original_paragraph"
 ],
 "checkNames": [
  "format_parses",
  "fields_present",
  "leads_with_point",
  "point_surfaced",
  "shorter",
  "wordcount_accurate",
  "background_cap",
  "dropped_nonempty",
  "no_preamble_echo"
 ],
 "constants": {},
 "deliverableLabel": "rewrite_bluf_lead_from_buried_point",
 "documentKeys": [
  "bluf_sentence",
  "dropped_lines",
  "rewritten_paragraph",
  "supporting_background",
  "word_count"
 ],
 "enumLiterals": [
  [
   "budgets are generally",
   "since the dawn",
   "as we all know",
   "it is well known",
   "in today",
   "for many years"
  ]
 ],
 "submission": "a JSON document (submitted as a string), validated as data; every check below must pass",
 "tier": "doc-validator"
}

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